I’ve got a new story I would like some feedback on please.

TA Talk With A Bully

• MLP: FiM
• Mystery
• Sad
• Slice of Life

After the CMC come home with black eyes, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity take it upon themselves to find out what happened.

• Narcotics
• Violence
• Profanity
• Alt. Universe
• Rainbow Dash
• Applejack
• Rarity
• Diamond Tiara
• CMCs

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The CMC come home with black eyes and their sisters take it upon themselves to find out what happened to them, when confronting Diamond Tiara about it, she just shrugs it off and deny that it ever happened.