Hiya, lovely peeps!

So I just wrote a story about how Twilight deals with the loss of her wing. Itʼa a short, sad and dramatic character exploration as as out favorite princess struggles with her grief.

ETo Lose & To Heal

• MLP: FiM
• Drama
• Sad

She thought she had known loss before. But she hadnʼt. Not truly.

• Twilight

Uz Naimat · 1000 words  ·  30  1 · 374 views

Iʼm looking for, as the forum title says, constructive criticism. Tell me what Iʼve done right, what ʼve done wrong, what works and what doesnʼt and how I can improve.

Your help would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.