Hiya, lovely peeps!

So for EileenSaysHiʼs Spring Fling Contest of this year, I submitted a sorry about Sunset Shimmer and Flash Sentry and the Rocky Start of their relationship. Theyʼre awkward, confused. Sunset is cold, Flash is nervous. But I need to know if I made them work.

With that said, any and all constructive feedback is more than welcome. Feel free to tell me what you think in the storyʼs comments.

Thanks and enjoy the dance!

TNo, Maybe, Yes

• Equestria Girls
• Romance
• Slice of Life

The Fall Formal is her chance to find out whether she likes him.

• Sunset Shimmer
• Flash Sentry

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