Hiya, lovely peeps!

Just what the title says. I wrote a story called What a Strange New World, centering on Sunset Shimmerʼs first steps in the human world. Two chapters are up, and I would really love some feedback on the latest update.

Please.

EWhat a Strange New World

• Equestria Girls
• Slice of Life

I jumped through the portal to escape Celestiaʼs wrath. Now, I find myself in this strange, new world. But thatʼs okay, Iʼll figure it out, like I always do.

• Other
• Sunset Shimmer

Uz Naimat · 7.6k words  ·  23  3 · 756 views