430531
Yeah, its always good to have a nice buildup and proper pacing.

430527

Oh I will. I've started already. I won't be getting to the seduction for a while yet though.

430526
Sure thing, take your time and have fun writing it.

430525

Well I don't plan on rushing it so it definitely won't be out today. I can let you know on here once it is done.

430524
Can't wait to see it!

430523

That is probably why she has no tag. I have begun the process of making it and hope I can get at least a little bit of progress done by the end of the weekend. Now I won't be publishing it until it is done though because I know some people will go claiming, "Oh it is too much like your Colgate x Fluttershy stories." Thing is, it won't be. Colgate and Shy never got intimate, Angel Wings will succeed in seducing Colgate. Now there will be romance involved though, no way am I putting Angel Wings in a simple story of a sexual encounter without any love developing during it.

430522
I know! WHY IS THERE NOT A SINGLE STORY ABOUT ANGEL WINGS?!?!?!

430521

I decided to take a look through the stories on this site and there is not one single Angel Wings story, which is very shocking.

430520
That's okay, many ponies shave different roles in stories.

430519

That is what I was thinking. If Shy's pet's name was different, such as Asshole or Jerk, it would be different. Normally I have Lyra being Colgate's sister and receptionist but given I have put her in that role in other Colgate doctor/patient romance stories, I am thinking of not doing that this time around.

430518

One big thing in the story though, when indicating she is speaking, would I just use Angel so it wouldn't get repetitive or use Angel Wings each time?

Well, you could...though FLuttershy's pet bunny's name is Angel, so I think you should add Angel Wings so people won't get confused...

430517

And while she is going to try and be strong at first, eventually Colgate will start blushing too once she has fallen for Angel Wings. One big thing in the story though, when indicating she is speaking, would I just use Angel so it wouldn't get repetitive or use Angel Wings each time?

430516
It would be a crime if it didn't!

430515

Also, think cute giggles would suit her personality as well, those along with intense blushes?

430514
Sweet.

430513

Given what we do know about her from "Top Bolt" I think she would complement my Colgate. Strong willed successful pony x timid, somewhat naive pony.....perfect match BUT I'm thinking that there would be something about Angel Wings that would be like kryptonite for Colgate, something that would cause her to lose the tough, I need nopony personality I give her sometimes as well.

430512
Eeyup, it most certainly would.

430511

And if I do it anthro, both could be well endowed....giving Angel Wings something to gaze at while her teeth are being worked on.....and later on naturally.

430510

She could tell Colgate, "You're my favorite dentist in all of Equestria" while perhaps batting her eyes at her because she will find Colgate attractive as well.

I can totally see Angel doing that!!!

430509

Yeah I do remember that. She could tell Colgate, "You're my favorite dentist in all of Equestria" while perhaps batting her eyes at her because she will find Colgate attractive as well. She would make the perfect sub in a relationship or even just a night of fun....which is something my Colgate would find very attractive.

One thing the art missed though, her bracelets on her left front leg.