Hi, I was wondering if anyone can review one of my crossover stories? This is my first time to get my stories reviewed as my desire in Fimfiction was to create the best MLP crossover stories so I'm doing the best I can to create good crossover that would be impossible or insane.

This story is a sequel to Mobile Suit Gundam Age while taking place in MLP Season 4 and it follows a new unicorn stallion, Cosmo Bringer, becoming the first student of Princess Twilight Sparkle while lead his double life as Equestria Savior, Gundam Age 4, in attempt to fight the Changelings and Queen Chrysalis that would change Equestria forever.

Anyway, hope you take your time to read it.