What the title says.

If you look at the number of views below, and if you can't see the number of likes/dislikes (5>2), then it means the story isn't doing so well.

EMLP Gen.4.5–Mysterious Mare-Do-Well

• MLP: FiM
• Equestria Girls
• MLP: Comic
• Adventure
• Comedy
• Mystery

The story of Equestria's self-proclaimed new hero, the Mysterious Mare-Do-Well.

• OC
• Mare Do Well
• Other
• Main 6

Phantom-Dragon · 9.5k words  ·  13  3 · 913 views

Can anyone lend a fellow writer some tips, or harsh criticism? Why isn't the story "hooking" more readers than my other stories?

7041833 There's no conflict in the short description.