Summary This chapter is basically Quiz's first day at school. Well, not first first day. First day of school in Ponyvile.
The Cons
On the way out to the playground Silver Spoon spoke to Diamond Tiara, just loud enough for Quiz to hear, "Do you know the way she watches everyone? Like, totally creepy."
Seriously? Please don't let it be that these two are the bullies for the entire story! If that's the case I'll have to blame this chapter! I don't like them. There's a skit in the beginning with Quiz opening a drawer multiple times that doesn't seem to go anywhere. It might have an impact later but right now it feels unimportant.
The Pros I also like this chapter. It's cute and Cheerilee and the CMC are amazing! This chapter is so great that I have to go to nitpicks for The Cons part of this!
Quizzical, Chapter Two, by JMac.
Summary This chapter is basically Quiz's first day at school. Well, not first first day. First day of school in Ponyvile.
The Cons
Seriously? Please don't let it be that these two are the bullies for the entire story! If that's the case I'll have to blame this chapter! I don't like them. There's a skit in the beginning with Quiz opening a drawer multiple times that doesn't seem to go anywhere. It might have an impact later but right now it feels unimportant.
The Pros I also like this chapter. It's cute and Cheerilee and the CMC are amazing! This chapter is so great that I have to go to nitpicks for The Cons part of this!
4941745 This is actually a fun way to get a review. I'm pleased you're enjoying the story so far.