So I posted a new story (Sun and Stone: A Tale of Fallen Friends: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/514581/sun-and-stone-a-tale-of-fallen-friends) and was hoping it'd get a little more attention, but hasn't been getting much.

Would really appreciated some input or feedback on the story, if only to know what people think of it and if they enjoyed it. Any feedback is welcomed as long as it is constructive.