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Of the first 50ish chapters, as done by Beware the Carpenter.

1.
Bucky Bitters is a unicorn stallion with a cutie-mark for brewing beer who has crippling social anxiety.
He accidentally runs into Derpy who develops an instant infatuation with him and begins chasing him as part of a pegasi courtship ritual. Bucky is repulsed by the brutish and carnal mentality of pegasi culture, in favor of the logical/ intellectual customs of unicorns.
Bucky regards pegasi as brutes.
Derpy regards unicorns as snobs.
Derpy catches Bucky.
2.
Derpy and Bucky discuss their cultural differences.
“We unicorns pride ourselves on our ability to converse. Physicality is shunned in favour of intellectual pursuits. I didn’t know how you communicated or that you used physical expression in place of verbal. I guess we had a moment as a unicorn and a pegasus,”
Derpy is the mother of a unicorn foal Dinky, whose father left her after impregnating her as a teenager, and Sparkler whose mother had been Derpy's friend before she died and acts as Dinky's big sister. Bucky invites Derpy out to dinner at a later date and Derpy goes to get her kids from school.
3.
Dinky is in trouble for “Punching” Diamond Tiara for bullying Piña Colada, when she had only “swatted” her; a light tap as a warning. She is confused as to why she is being punished.
Piña Colada is an earth pony, and sees her friend Dinky as similar to an earth pony for her herd mentality.
Derpy attempts to explain to Cheerilee the difference between a swat and a punch. Cheerilee doesn't listen and Derpy thinks earth ponies are numbskulls
4.
Sparkler is a “moody teenager”
Despite formerly deciding she would be lesbian, to avoid being a single mother like Derpy, seeing her old crush, a poetic unicorn colt named Rising Star, talking to a filly named Apple Cobbler renews desire and jealousy for him. She chases him, confusing both of them. Rising Star resolves to write another poem about Sparkler.
Cheerilee is stressed about trying to hold all three tribes in the one classroom, and is angry at Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon for their constant bullying.
5.
Filthy Rich glares judgmentally at a napping Rainbow Dash, and fumes about how lazy pegasi are.
Rainbow Dash naps after an exhausting day of work, and thinks about how much harder pegasi have to work than the other tribes.
Pegasi belch after eating to show appreciation for the meal.
Unicorns pride individualism, use spells to keep their hormones in check, and typically have few children and often send them to be brought up in Boarding Schools. Bucky was one such foal and has had very little contact with his parents, and the relationship he did have was emotionally abusive. He is from House Avarice.
Feeling lonely, Bucky boards a train.
6.
Filthy Rich watches Derpy deliver the mail, admiring her hard work and determination.
Derpy notices Filthy Rich watching her, and thinks him condescending and insincere.
Bucky, a graduate of Celestia's School for gifted unicorns, returns to ask Celestia's advice, even though he feels her as judgmental.
Celestia feels deeply for all her students, noting the the most gifted unicorns were often the most damaged by society. She considers Bucky to have “a deeply ingrained passion and a genuine sense of kindness” yet also realizes her attempts to heal his emotional damages caused more hurt, “like ripping away a scab to allow the infection to seep out.”
Bucky tells Celestia about being chased by Derpy.
7.
Celestia instructs Bucky to make friends with members of the other tribes; and to check up on the friendship studies of Twilight Sparkle.
She also gives the advice that:
“Pegasi approach everything with the notion that the best defense is a good offense, while earth ponies believe the opposite is true, that when trouble comes it is best to stick with those you know and protect the weak by presenting a united front. Pegasi approach trouble with surgical precision, making carefully coordinated strikes to weaken and cripple their enemies. Earth ponies approach conflict in the same way they approach hard work, by throwing numbers at it and overwhelming whatever it might be that threatens them.”
8.
Thunder lane tells Bucky that if he hurts Derpy, he will answer to the flock.
Bucky visits Derpy, she is hesitant to speak to him but Sparkler pushes her outside and locks the door, then watches from the window with Dinky. Derpy invites Bucky to Dinky's birthday that Saturday.
Bucky says he is an accountant working for Filthy Rich, but plans to start a beer brewing business.
Derpy mentions her friend Berry Punch, older sister and acting mother to Piña Colada; saying she has a brewery.
Bucky and Derpy are both highly attracted to each other.
9.
Bucky goes to Canterlot in search of a birthday present, and settles on the entire Daring Do book series, plus merchandise.
Rising Star is coming to Dinky's birthday to see Sparkler. He considers a long term relationship with Apple Cobbler unlikely.
Celestia is proud of her 'experiment' in Ponyville as being a 'shining jewel' of acceptance and co-habitation. She has asked Rainbow Dash and Twilight to keep an eye on Bucky and Derpy, and to keep her informed.
10.
At Dinky's party Derpy struts her feathers for Bucky, which he dosn't notice because he is busy being a 'good guest' by sitting still and staying quiet. Berry Punch explains this to both of them, and then admits she was turned on by Derpy's display and suggests Derpy has just made her bi-sexual, along with implying a threesome.
Bucky is amazed watching Dinky and Piña Colada playing roughly, in stark contrast to the reserved, somber unicorns he grew up with.
Rising Star sneaks a kiss on Sparkler. She pushes him away, though obviously still likes him.
Dinky is thrilled with Bucky's gift which far outshines any other gift she received.
A large number of pegasi are watching from a distance, including Rainbow Dash and Twilight.
11.
After the party; Bucky, Derpy and Berry sit around the table drinking some alcohol that Bucky brought. Berry tells how her parents died when a still exploded.
Berry Punch is from Clan Pickled; a large family of mixed races, which began when a unicorn married an earth pony, sparking a civil war against Bucky's distant lineage. She is highly experienced in cross-tribe cultures.
There is mutual 3-way flirtation.
Bucky broke contact with his parents when they disowned him after he refused an arranged marriage.
Bucky learns about pegasi belching table manners.
Sparkler appears and suggests the 3 adults go out together.
(There is an unequal birth rate, with more mares born than stallions.)
12.
The next day, Berry Punch considers her relationships with Derpy and Bucky; thinking Bucky could satisfy her intellectually and Derpy physically.
Sparkler examines herself in the mirror; wishing she had wings so she could be like her role model Derpy. She is cautious of her feelings for Rising Star, because she fears being a single, teenage mom.
Diamond Tiara sees it her role to lead a herd, but through ingrained methods from a more brutal time:
“she simply behaved as her biology demanded, she continued to try and cull the herd for the sake of survival, forcing the weak away from the center so that the strong could thrive and leave behind viable offspring. Her behavior, once a valued asset to evolutionary biology, was now a social nuisance that caused her and all around her to suffer needlessly.”
Derpy chases Bucky and Berry Punch. Sparkler joins in in running with Bucky and Berry Punch, increasing social bonds, but non-romantically for her.
13.
Hungover, and considering his upcoming date with Derpy, and Berry who is coming as a translator, Bucky efficiently does his accountant job when someone comes in saying Diamond Tiara has been assaulted.
Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon attack Piña Colada. Dinky has a magic surge and summons a swarm of magic bees that attack, and almost kill, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. She gains a cutie-mark for bees.
Bucky and Filthy Rich arrive at the scene. Bucky stops Filthy Rich from attacking Dinky in fury; and then pegasi take him, Dinky and Piña Colada to Derpy's house, where Bucky collapses in a panic attack.
14. Bucky wakes up in Derpy's house with Celestia there. Dinky has powerful level three magic and needs advanced teaching to control it. To prevent the family from being broken up by her going to Celestia's School for gifted unicorns, Bucky becomes her tutor, being paid a teachers salary by Celestia.
15.
Filthy Rich waits at the hospital, finally admitting to himself that his filly's a monster. He resolves to try and fix her.
Thunderlane had seen the magic surge when it began, and sent several pegasi to get medical help and Filthy Rich; but then sat back to watch, believing the bullies deserved punishment and Dinky wouldn't go too far. Rainbow Dash gives him a flurry of swats, several punches, and yells at him for letting a potentially lethal situation continue, then gives him a hug and promises the flock stand with him if he's legally charged.
Derpy comforts Dinky, and tells her Bucky will tutor her.
16.
Bucky begins teaching Dinky magic by making her pop popcorn.
17.
Filthy Rich visits to apologies. He offers to pay half of Bucky's salary and help any way he can with Dinky's education.
Rising Star asks Sparkler about how she's dealing with Dinky's situation. He says he wants to understand her better, then snoot bumps her and runs away. She chases him.
Berry Punch thinks about how earth ponies are better at reading people, and she herself has an excellent sense of direction. She remembers an old adage
A unicorn to light my way, a pegasus to watch over me, and an earth pony to shoulder my heavy burdens.
And considers the tribes working together as a whole.
18.
Luna is trying to re-condition Filthy Rich. She gives him a dream about a member of each tribe standing together, and of himself being alone and attacked by a swarm of bees that look like little Diamond Tiara's.
Bucky continues teaching Dinky, feeling fulfilled and free of panic.
19.
Derpy comes home and finds everyone asleep, and the house a mess including popcorn stuck magically to the ceiling. After calming her down, she playfully wrestles with Dinky and Pina, arousing Bucky.
Derpy and Berry Punch gang up to wrestle Bucky, arousing him more.
After the foals leave, Derpy then goes to take a bath. Berry talks to Bucky about their developing 3-way relationship and then goes to join Derpy in the bath, leaving him to watch the foals.
20.
In the bath, Berry and Derpy discuss Bucky.
“We’ve taken away his fine unicorn sense of control and now he is probably feeling a bit of a complex because he likes it, and he is going to feel bad about liking it, so we are going to have to plot against him and keep doing little things because he likes it but would never admit to it and never wants to engage us to satisfy his own desires, because admission that he likes it and he wants us to keep doing it would be painfully uncomfortable for him. So we have no choice to plot against him,”
Bucky easily cleans the house with magic, as a lesson to Dinky. Sparkler comes home.
21.
Celestia instructs Twilight to keep an eye on Bucky and his developing loves, saying she is reconsidering her decision to abolish polygamy but needs specific information. She also mentions Thunderlane is married to two sisters, Flitter and Cloudchaser, who do not sleep with each other.
'Bucky's future family' has dinner at a restaurant. Flirtation is common between the three adults to which Sparkler is supportive. Dinky and Pina are too young to understand. Bucky eats small bites with his spoon, and wipes his mouth with a napkin after every bite, and is startled by pegasus table manners, which apart from being noisy includes licking food off each other's muzzles.
22.
Dinky can go back to school if Bucky comes with her. He will also be teaching the other unicorn foals basic magic.
Derpy aggressively makes out with him.
Bucky takes a shower. Berry gets in with him and makes out with him.
23.
Berry Punch thinks thinks her farm, would be a good place for Bucky to give potentially destructive magic lessons. She also plans to rebuild the dilapidated farmhouse and brewery that are there.
Derpy things about Bucky, and commits to teaching him pegasus table manners; before his bad manners spread to Dinky.
Back in school, the rest of the foals keep whispering about what Dinky's magic surge; greatly upsetting Dinky and causing Bucky to take her and Pina out of the classroom.
Dinky wants to visit Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon in hospital to apologize. Bucky advises against it, but reluctantly agrees to take her and Pina.
24.
Bucky, Dinky and Pina visit Diamond Tiara, who have been her only visitors except her father and Cheerilee. The three foals share a silent, bonding moment.
Silver Spoon's family will be moving as soon as she's healthy enough to move.
Derpy and Berry run in, after hearing, without context, from Thunderlane that Bucky had 'taken their foals to the hospital'.

25.
Berry takes Bucky, Derpy and the foals to her farm to brew beer. Bucky is able to use magic to do several hours worth of strenuous labor in minutes, but will need to eat vast amounts later to replace the calories.
While preparing dinner later, Derpy's wings are sore after her heavy load that day and Bucky magically scratches her back, causing Derpy to orgasm. The foals try to explain to each other what happened, just as Sparkler walks in with Rising Star. The foals try explaining “snorgasms” to Rising Star, humiliating Sparkler.
Dinner is vegetable soup with no silverware and no napkins. Rising Star takes to it, while Bucky is very stressed after Derpy tells him he's not allowed to use magic.
26.
After dinner, the family relaxes and talks.
Berry is angry at Celestia's decree banning herds, talking about the families it ripped apart.
Bucky and Morning Star mention how the most powerful unicorns, are most messed up mentally, and some have 'whispers from Tartarus' trying to control them. Neurosis helps to act as a defense.
Pegasi typically have extremely short courtships, with a month being considered very long, while unicorns consider a year as 'rushing in'.
27.
Bucky sleeps on the couch, and wakes up screaming from a nightmare.
Berry and Derpy give him a bath, and the three of them go to bed together non-sexually.
28.
Twilight and Rainbow Dash meet with Thunderlane and his wives to discuss legalizing group marriages. Thunderlane and his wives will help keep an eye on Bucky. Twilight leaves for a visit to Fillydelphia.
Rainbow Dash also remarks she's too awesome to marry only one pony.
Bucky wakes up, feeling very stressed and self-conscious.
He uses his magic to make breakfast, during which Berry Punch tackles him, then suddenly stops and says that “It’s been fun and games up to this point, but something changed just a moment ago,” but she just realized then that she actually loved him.
Bucky takes the foals to school, and teaches the unicorn foals to “Blink”, a magical distress call that will summon any pegasi who's been to flight camp.
After school, Bucky takes the foals home. Derpy and Berry are away shopping. When Bucky goes to the bathroom, Dinky takes his spell book and finds the “Want It Need It” spell and uses it on herself, thinking it will make Bucky want to be her father.
When Bucky comes back, he feels extremely powerful sexual lust for Dinky, but using his mental control, neurosis, and banging his head against the wall several times controls, he barely manages to control himself. Pina rushes to Dinky, also feeling unnaturally lustful, but Bucky pulls them apart and tries to bring them to Twilight so she can undo the spell.
Outside, nearly every pony who sees Dinky is powerfully affected, and Bucky needs to use a variety of spells, including dark magic, to prevent Dinky being gang raped to death by most of Ponyville; while fighting off his own urges.
After reaching the library, and learning Twilight isn't there, he commits to simply run as far away as he can; and then runs into Discord, who shits bricks in surprise and then vanquishes the spell.
Celestia arrives moments later, and Bucky collapses in a serious panic attack.
29.
Bucky wakes up in hospital, badly hurt from magical overload. Celestia commends him on his bravery, self-control and powerful magic. His memory of the event has been altered, so that the 'Want it Need it' spell made everyone want to be Dinky's friend, and he stopped her from being trampled. Everyone else's memories have also been altered.
He will need several weeks to recover, during which Derpy and Berry will take care of him.
Another of Celestia's Students, Lyra Heartstrings, will take over Dinky's tutoring in the meantime. Lyra's lover Bon Bon is also coming.
30.
Bucky is cared for by the four mares, plus Sparkler.
Twilight returns to Ponyville with Cloudstreaker; the foal of Thunderlane and Cloudchaser who was taken from them by foal services.
Celestia and Luna discuss altering the memories of Dinky's spell for everyone in Ponyville to prevent stress to the family and stop a wave of pedophilia from breaking out.
They also discuss Celestia's 'projects' over the last thousand years, giving different conditions to different towns in an effort to create a utopia. They also mention how Bucky has demonstrated Generosity, with his gift to Dinky, Kindness, with the foals forgiving Diamond Tiara and Loyalty in repressing his urges to rape Dinky.
31.
Berry gives the history to the abolition of herds:
Centuries ago, within the greater unicorn houses where a stallion had married mares from different houses, there was a spree of murders of the wives killing each other, and each other's foals to increase power.
Pegasi were often recruited as bodyguards, (or assassins) and the strife spread to the pegasi, eventually getting so bad that Celestia outlawed all herd marriages, including earth ponies who had mostly stayed out of the conflict.
This resulted in thousands of mares no longer able to find a partner, due to higher birth rate of mares to stallions, forming the independent city of Fillydelphia; which became a community of foalnappers to maintain their population. Later the city was re-absorbed into Equestria, but maintains overzealous foal services.
32.
Twilight returns Cloudstreaker to her family, then heads for Canterlot, followed by Rainbow Dash.
Still critically weak, Bucky is bathed by Derpy and Berry; who are still trying to break down his social barriers.
“You’re like an infant right now, you have to rely on us for everything. We’re slamming through your barriers, your shame, your guilt, and your repression with every change of the bedpan, every touch, every caress. And your brain is receptive right now because of your physical and emotional state.”
Berry sits with her legs widely parted and asks Bucky to look, but he still refuses.
33.
Lyra shows Dinky Bucky's cracked horn, explaining it's physiology. She also mentions Pegasi having glands that exert a chemical that hardens skin and bone, allowing them to crash without injury. Earth ponies are more fertile, and close are able to make other ponies more fertile through close contact.
Bon Bon talks about how she helped rehabilitate Lyra after Lyra had had a complete mental breakdown. Celestia wants her to do the same for Bucky. Lyra still has extreme difficulty socializing by herself, or functioning long without Bon Bon there. Bon Bon describes herself as Lyra's “seeing eye pony”.
Bucky admits that Berry helps him understand social conditions, similar to what Bon Bon does for Lyra, but Derpy makes him feel safe. Duel contrasts which he needs.
34.
Luna and Celestia discuss Bucky's recovery, which Luna is augmenting through his dreams. Twilight comes in, furious about the state of Fillydelphia;
“The two sisters carefully began to weave a sordid tale, explaining how Princess Luna’s banishment led up to the problems that Fillydelphia was having currently in the modern day. They spoke of Luna’s desire to take orphans from the many wars that founded Equestria and start a new colony, Luna’s fall, they spoke of war, of curses, of black magic left behind by Nightmare Moon, a shadow government that had endured for almost one thousand years that held loyalty to Nightmare Moon and awaited her return, influencing things in the background and working against Celestia, and with each word they spoke, everything Twilight Sparkle thought she knew about Equestria died just a little bit more as the bigger picture began to be revealed.”
They do not tell her everything.
Berry visits Bucky's house to pack up his things, and is disgusted by how lonely and dreary it feels.
35.
Filthy Rich is becoming more generous, much like Mr. Scrooge after The Christmas Carol.
Derpy tells Rising Star she will love him if he's good to Sparkler, and kill him if he isn't.
Earth Ponies release chemicals and pheromones which affect the mental states of those around them; like Pinkie being able to make people laugh and Berry being able to make Bucky relax. Bon Bon is, unknowingly, the extreme pinnacle of this. Lyra is literally addicted to the chemicals she produces which is why she can't function long without Bon Bon. The candies Bon Bon makes with her hooves also have a drug-like effect.
Bucky admits to Bon Bon his strong physical/ sexual attraction to Derpy. He says Berry isn't as beautiful, but is attracted to her intellectually and is afraid she is smarter than him. He wants to gain even hoofing with her by reducing both of them to the level of dirty rutting animals.
36.
Bucky is healing, and wakes up with morning wood, (an erection), much to the delight of Derpy and Berry, although there is no sex.
Afterwards, Bucky has a long conversation with Derpy about raising foals.
37.
Berry's elderly, beloved uncle Barley O’Blivion arrives to retire in Ponyville. He acts just as cheeky as Berry.
Barley O’Blivion likes Bucky, but is worried if Berry has powerful unicorn foals, House Avarice will try to take them.
Dinky and Pina are thrilled to see Barely.
38.
Bucky writes Celestia a letter asking her to legalize herds.
Berry goes to visit Bucky's parents. Rainbow Dash sees her get on a train, and convinces Twilight to help follow her.
It's revealed that the magic overload of Bucky protecting Dinky and subsequent recovery has increased Bucky's magic to a level four.
Bucky watches Sparkler and Barley have a belching contest. He is disgusted, but due to breaking social barriers, tries to do it anyway. He uses the same magic for the Royal Canterlot Voice, and makes a monstrous belch that can be heard across town.
39.
Berry Punch goes to Bucky's parent's house; and attacks Bucky's mother including: smashing her teeth, breaking one leg and kicking her filly bits.
Twilight and Rainbow Dash watch in horror, but don't intervene.
On the way back, Berry discusses “Feminism” (what ponies call polygamy) with several mares on the train.
She comes home and declares she just started a war.
40.
With their permissions, Celestia draws out their memories of watching Berry attack Bucky's mother. Celestia is mortified, mourning what could be the death of her Ponyville project.
Twilight and Rainbow Dash visit Bucky, Berry and Derpy. She says she understands that Berry has more options to 'protect her foals' in a declared state of war and that even today foals are sometimes taken in sweeps from the Shetland Isles to be raised on the mainland. Twilight agrees that this must stop, but is still mad and places Berry under house arrest until she figures out what to do.
Rainbow Dash is more supportive and promises the flock will protect them.
Celestia tells Luna that she sent a dozen royal guards to arrest Berry Punch. Twilight took eleven of them hostage, and sent the last back with a note saying she has declared Ponyville an independent republic with it's own flag. House Avrice is preparing for war. Luna comforts a distraught Celestia, telling her 'there is another filly in her sandbox who is playing with her sand'.
Bucky's mother will recover in a day or two, with the best doctors in Canterlot caring for her.
Luna goes to Ponyville, visits the captured soldiers who are enjoying their stay and agrees to surrender to Twilight as a show of good faith.
41.
Every unicorn in Ponyville has been ordered by house Avrice to return to Canterlot and swear loyalty. Rising Star's family is staying. Rising Star more or less proposes to Sparkler.
Luna meets with Twilight, Bucky, Berry and Derpy. She says that since Berry yelled a declaration of war before attacking Bucky's mother, it was technically legal. Starting a war is more serious, but so long as no one dies, Berry should be showed leniency. Luna also supports herd marriages and says now that the old treaties are broken, new ones can be made. Derpy identifies herself as the Alpha of the new herd, and no one disagrees.
42.
Bucky's mother, Primrose Propers, demands Celestia take action against Berry. She refuses.
The leader of Clan Pickled, Keg Smasher, sends Celestia a letter which offers her hope.
More family bonding time with Bucky. Sparkler calls him 'dad for the first time.
43.
On their way to Ponyville, Celestia discusses the situation with Cadance who is in support of Twilight and herd marriages.
Arriving at Ponyville, Twilight is overcome with emotion seeing her family again.
Celestia goes to see the captured soldiers and Luna. After a night of drinking, most of the guard are passed out. Luna, awake but drunk off her plot, is still drinking with Barely O'Bitters who she's also slept with.
44.
Twilight and her family agree House Avrice should be dismantled for their crimes of the last thousand years, knowing that it may well destroy all the noble houses in the process, including their own.
Celestia talk with Thunderland and his family about their relationships.
45.
Celestia visits Bucky's family and tells them Keg Smasher offered to help make peace, if she allows Bucky/Derpy/Berry's wedding. Cadance will conduct the ceremony.
Dinky is developing powerful control of her magic.
Luna continues to drink and flirt drunkenly with Barely.
Celestia drinks with Bucky and his family, becoming steadily drunk and talking about how nice it is to relax and not feel pressured to act regal. Cadance and Twilight arrive to deliver a plastered Luna and Barely.
46.
More social bonding over drinks between Bucky's family and the four alicorns.
Back in the library, a ledger is delivered to Twilight detailing some of the finances of House Avrice and the money it makes from the sweeps. She is greatly disturbed.
Bucky, Berry and Derpy discuss their wedding planned for tomorrow. Derpy shows Bucky how she can crack a walnut with her vagina.
47.
Derpy and Berry are nervous before the wedding, and encourage each other.
Bucky is nervous. He receives sex advice and a book of erotic spells from Celestia.
They conduct the wedding. Luna attends the wedding with Barely. Later, Cadance admits to Celestia she cast a spell that would put the mares in heat when the sun set.
48.
Ponies have sex.
(I skimmed over this chapter.)
49.
Bucky, Berry and Derpy wake up sore and sticky to a destroyed bed. After they bathe, they find Barely downstairs making them breakfast.
Luna has hired him to make large amounts of alcohol; he is still the legal owner of 'Berry's' farmhouse with they brewery on it. They will all live together as a herd; with the brewery being the family business. Derpy is no longer a mail mare.
Although Derpy is the female Alpha, Bucky is the male alpha and so it was his decision to let Barely join the herd.
50.
Twilight shows the ledger to her family and Celestia; and they discuss dismantling House Avrice. Celestia is distraught that this could have happened under her watch. Celestia says that while House Avrice has political power, they have no standing army and most of their members learned little more than basic magic in favor of studying politics and legality.
Keg Smasher has offered the Shetland Isles's army of over 1,000 trained soldiers if they are needed to maintain order. Twilight offers the troops, (weather patrols) of Ponyville, but Shining Armor points out Ponyville is not at war with Canterlot, nor is it allies and so cannot legally send troops in. Twilight declares war.
Bucky talks to his family about how he now feels very protective of them; and would kill everyone in House Avrice to keep them safe. He also agrees to teach Dinky, Sparkler and Rising Star combat magic for self defense.
51.
Berry has been summoned by Keg Smasher to the Shetland Isles. The whole family will go.
An old stallion of House Avrice argues with paintings of Princess Platinum, admitting that his family has ruined everything. He sent the ledger to Twilight.
Luna defends her relationship with Barely to Celestia. She describes it as a 'fling' but will continue to be 'friends' with Barely.
As the family prepares to head off for the Shetland Isles, Bucky gives Dinky another talk about how true power is in restraint. Since his recovery, he is no longer timid and withdrawn, but like 'a lion looking down on his pride.'
52.
At the train station Twilight says that this might be a one way trip. Berry says she will go alone, Derpy says Bucky should go with her and Bucky says the three of them and the foals will all go. Sparkler chooses to come, Rising Star says goodbye to his parents and comes with her.
Barely is staying. Tearful goodbyes, including Diamond Tiara who is healed, and sees Dinky and Pina as her only friends. After the family leave, Lyra tells Bon Bon that they should have gone with them.

This is a copy and paste job from a private message, so forgive any formatting issues.

wow so much happened, and this is only the first 52 chapters. the isles and griffinholme (not sure I spelled that right) add so much as well.

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he summarizes them?!?!?

...only 817 chapters left... until current (as of 27/01/2016)

You got a lot of dedicated fans, Mr. Kudzu! I think we like your story :pinkiehappy:

I wish we could fave blogs

5007845 lol that's what i was wanting to know.. lol hell i just finished after about 4 months of reading on and off i feel accomplished.. xD to try and do all that just to give an idea on what each chapters about its nuts.. xD lmao being one day i might go back and read it again but i don't plan on it anytime soon. Hell when if first started reading this thing i thought hell its only going to be 20 chapters max and what not.. hit about 40 thinking ok wth? then i look and at the time i see i think at the time 730 chapters... xD im like... no... way... i nearly gave up on it then being i really had no idea what to look forward to with that many chapters. Im happy i stuck with it though and im hoping kudz considers my oc for some sort of use be it helping in the war on the dark stallion to being another male figure at home, or hell or just some scary ass background character that you don't want to piss off if you mess with his nephew's famly.. lol I like the idea of a loving uncle but someone you really don't want to piss off by messing with family.. xD

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