The Best Day of the Year

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Sad

Grammar: 10/10.

Characterization: 10/10. I loved Luna's interactions with Chocolate Cream.

Use of OCs: 10/10. Chocolate Cream is a very original and well-realized character.

Use of Show Canon: 10/10. It's a very interesting expansion on Luna. Unfortunately, if I were to say why it would be a spoiler.

Plot Consistency: 10/10. Every element fit together well.

Plot Coherence: 10/10. This is the kind of story where you find out more about the premise as you near the conclusion, but the story makes it work.

Final Score: 60/60 or 100%

Verdict: This story was genuinely poignant and I'm very happy to give it a grade of Enthusiastically Accepted.