Lament for a Shadow

Genre: Sad

Wordcount: 2,077

Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
-Found no clear spelling or grammar issues.

Characterization: 10/10
-Does a fantastic job of personifying Luna before and up to her fall to Nightmare Moon.

Use of show canon: 10/10
-Presents the fall of Luna to Nightmare Moon from Luna's point of view and as a sad act against her will, fantastically done.

Plot consistency: 10/10
-Does a great job of leading you from Luna's realization that something darker is stalking her until that darkness overtakes her mind in the end.

Use of OCs: NA

Coherence: 8/10
-Because of the constant description of shadows and darkness and mirrors at times it became a tiny bit aggravating to follow the flow at times.

Extra: 10/10
Sad: 10/10
-Does a fantastic job of showing you the pain and fear that is tormenting and tearing apart Luna's heart.

Total: 58 / 60 - 96.7%

Penalties: None

Final Score: 58 / 60 - 96.7%

3660104 Huzzah! My success has been doubled!

3660269 Luna is best pony

3660277 And may no one forget that.