Hints about the story.

1)It's written with a tottaly serious mind. ((I am in no way trolling you about this))
2)My editor at the second page of the fic told me "Okay when are those two gonna do the do?"...
3)... and then proceeded to sarcastically laugh when the chance was "cockblocked"...
4).... and then sarcastically raged when by the end of the fic they remained "just friends"
5)I ended up changing and deleting many parts that wiped this opportunity away. SHIPPING FUEL FTW!!!
6)The OC used is my first OC and to me is a symbol of how far I've gotten in creating OC stories.

Oh and if you read the story...

1)I will respond personally to EVERY SINGLE COMMENT
2)I will accept constructive feedback
3)I WILL GIVE YOU AWESOMESAUCE!
4)I WILL HUG YOU, AND LOVE YOU, AND CALL YOU GEORGE! :P

So go read the story. You won't regret it.

I hope...

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/280192/origins---selune-darkeye

Problem: billing this as an "OC origin story" might as well read, "hey, I wrote a thing to show off my Mary Sue character!"

You need to sell this story based on what makes it a good story. Why does a reader want to read this? What happens and why is it interesting to anyone who's not you and doesn't already have a pre-existing investment in these characters?

4592777 Really? Is it that bad?