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FamousLastWords
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Here's the story by DerpyDitzyDerpyDo.

Mood: Romantic, but not super cheesy.

Grammar: Impeccable

Style: Unique and easy to read

Here's the gist: Applejack becomes friends with Trixie after a chance encounter. Sound generic? Well, it is.

It's a terrific read however. It was heartwarming, cute, humorous, and had an unusual ship. Not to mention, Trixie is my favourite pony. :ajsmug:

It had its flaws. Pacing was alright, however some moments just seemed out of place or unnecessary. Nothing serious though.

This story is very much worth your time.

Final Verdict: 8/10

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