Here's the story by DerpyDitzyDerpyDo.
Mood: Romantic, but not super cheesy.
Grammar: Impeccable
Style: Unique and easy to read
Here's the gist: Applejack becomes friends with Trixie after a chance encounter. Sound generic? Well, it is.
It's a terrific read however. It was heartwarming, cute, humorous, and had an unusual ship. Not to mention, Trixie is my favourite pony.
It had its flaws. Pacing was alright, however some moments just seemed out of place or unnecessary. Nothing serious though.
This story is very much worth your time.
Final Verdict: 8/10
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Here's the story by DerpyDitzyDerpyDo.
Mood: Romantic, but not super cheesy.
Grammar: Impeccable
Style: Unique and easy to read
Here's the gist: Applejack becomes friends with Trixie after a chance encounter. Sound generic? Well, it is.
It's a terrific read however. It was heartwarming, cute, humorous, and had an unusual ship. Not to mention, Trixie is my favourite pony.
It had its flaws. Pacing was alright, however some moments just seemed out of place or unnecessary. Nothing serious though.
This story is very much worth your time.
Final Verdict: 8/10
2616470
Thanks so much!