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This is a review for A Friend to the End by Abramus5250.

This is a sad one-shot about the princess' last hour before a catastrophic end of the Earth.

This was very well written with impeccable grammar and a well thought out story line. The imagery and emotion was vivid and connectable to the reader, and everything was explained thoroughly.

Everything was explained thoroughly.

This may possibly be the only flaw in the story. The explanation made perfect sense and erased all possible questions that were forming in my head, but at the same time, it felt like a history lesson rather than a story. It focused moreover on the history behind the end rather than the actually end itself. It could have flowed very more fluently had the author stressed the 'sad' part of the story more than the 'history' part. Emotions could have literally poured from the reader had this been the case.

This does not mean it's a bad story, it is certainly heartbreaking and relateable; death is a scary sub part of life for most people. The expression was lucid and enjoyable, and the descriptions spoke for themselves.

I congratulate the author on this emotionally advocate writing.

Rating: 9/10

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