Alright everypony, here's a review for the story To Touch The Moon by Shrinky Frod.

It's a short one-shot revolving around Dash recalling past events that led to her relationship with Luna.

I give props definitely for using an uncommon ship, and the grammar is excellent. Pacing was fine, and the dialogue did its job.

However, I didn't like it. I thought the premise was boring and a tad awkward, and parts of it didn't even feel like romance.. But, my personal opinion isn't enough to detract from what it did right.

Final verdict: 7/10

2595298 Oh, BTW, I had an idea on how we could do these reviews. Want me to PM you the details?

2595323 yes please

2595298
Thanks for the review!

I'll admit, the story could've been developed further and turned into something longer. Ultimately, it was one of my projects that sprang out of a SMP prompt, so I only had an hour to write it - that's where a lot of the shortness came from.

Still, all certainly valid issues with the story, even I'll say that!