I am currently working on a story that I have been having issues keeping up with it. I have things planned out for it but the one rutt I keep on running into is I try a little too hard and vear off course with out realizing it. I am not asking for an editor or a proof reader, what I need is someone that understands how things would play out or would it work from a story telling perspective. my story take inspiration from the Batman mythos for the reason, Ive been really wanting to make my own vigilante style story from the ground up and I've using the Batman mythos as a reference.
if you are interested message me or reply here and I'll get back to you.

I can help with keeping storyline confined

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Thanks for the reply! What is the best way to contact you? I use discord, Skype, and other things.

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Just message me on here and I'll get it broke down.