TElements: Beautiful Stories for Ugly Children

• MLP: FiM
• Devil May Cry
• Metal Gear
• Anthology

Beings accustomed to strife and spite adjust to a new life of harmony, and try not to ruin it for themselves. Temptations and opportunities for a little fun will hinder their resolve, though. Hopefully the damage won't be too great.

• Violence
• Crossover
• Other
• Main 6

Nightmare_0mega · 95k words  ·  15  0 · 587 views

I am looking for any sort of critique for this story, and possibly grow my audience a bit. Currently, this is the story/collection I'm mostly working on, and thus need feedback on, however, it is both a sequel AND an Anthology, taking place after my previously completed story "Elements Change the Dark Hearts". The prior story isn't entirely necessary to be able to understand or enjoy "Beautiful Stories for Ugly Children", but the context will at least explain how/why some of these characters are present, and why they are paired up with members of the Mane Six.

I'd greatly appreciate any and all feedback, and look forward to hearing from any of you in the comments section.