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I need help on deciding which few chapters ideas I could elaborate more on the story Lightning Seven: Equestria Bound. The basic plot is seven animal mercs are sent to equestrian and get into various situations, here are what I have so far:

-nightmare night chapter where the mercs go a bit too far with scaring everyone

-the townsfolk of ponyville spy on the mercs because they believe they are secretly evil (even though the main six try convincing the town that they aren't)

-The team attends to big fancy party (possibly Grand galloping gala)

-The team are forced to tend to Princess Luna while she's sick (joke is she's faking the whole thing)

Please I need serious help on these. Criticism and opinions are welcomed.

3024637 I think your problem is, that you haven't thought of an ending yet. Do that and the rest of the story will write itself.

3024814 technically I have the ending, I just thought it was short and I had some new ideas but I didn't want to milk a cash cow too much

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