First off, before i give you the link, let me say this first before anyone else does. I know about the editing group.s I've tried them, and i've gotten no luck out of them. So, i'm wanting to see if anyone can help me with the editing with this fic. just simple grammer and stuff. That and maybe proof-reader, but it depends on what happens though.

Here it is.

well Gamer x edited my story so you can ask and see.

HEY! I remember this fic! Was a long time ago, he, is, a dimensional lord

I looked over the story. And as tempting as it is, I'm afraid your story needs a complete redraft.

I'd love to oversee the revision, but I am currently neck deep in my own novel's editing and such.

My advice is to rewrite it. Take the scissors and the tape, and cut and paste.

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I'll oversee it! I've got time onmy hands.

1435093 Actually, I was planning on doing that...sort of. I mean, I deleted the prolouge, mostly because it was doing nothing but bring dislikes to it, and Re-did the entire, and i am planning on remastering other chapters, and but it's only when i have time on my hands.

1435056You do? whait, what are you talking about?

1434642i'll check into it.

1435115 ok, sure.

1440888 I remember reading is fic

1443252 so, you liked it?

Meh it's not bad