I have a story I am working on on this site that I have not submitted yet because my characters have yet to reach Equestria. However before I go any further I would like for someone to look over what I have written so far and just check it for general errors. Is anyone willing to help?

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check it for general errors

Have you used all of these yet?
http://auto-reviewer.appspot.com
http://www.reverso.net/spell-checker/english-spelling-grammar
http://www.onlinecorrection.com
http://www.spellcheck.net/
http://www.slickwrite.com
http://www.paperrater.com/free_paper_grader
http://www.writersdiet.com/WT.php
http://hemingwayapp.com
http://www.polishmywriting.com/
http://spellcheckplus.com/
http://www.grammarcheck.me/
https://app.grammarly.com/
http://www.expresso-app.org/
http://www.webpagefx.com/tools/read-able/

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Had no idea there were so many sites like that, but when I say general errors I mean things like cliche checks, contradiction checks, and the like.