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Need some help writing lyrics for this:

4468334
First, we need a kind of "start point", in which the lyrics will be introduced. Once I have a good idea of that, I can try to muster up some lyrics for it.

4468334
1. Great instrumental!
2. How about "Was our friendship meant to deceive? Is that what she'd believe?" "To keep up the illusion, you were a necessary exclusion."

4468369 The time when the electro-whistle comes in.

4468386 Nice! Maybe 4468369 could include them?

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I'm sorry, I've been working non stop making pictures, banners, badges, and a video I made for this one group.
Sorry, but I need some damn rest.

4469540 It's perfectly fine.

Feel up to it yet?

Hmm...
4468386 nice start, can I build on that?

Okay... I built on that...

Okay, breakdown: SA Sweetie Drops, Bon Bon, Lyra. First use of chorus is at standard "whispy" level, rest are quieter. Color designates change of singer/voice. Dash signals holding the note out, three dots means fade.

Was our friendship meant to deceive?
Is that what she'd belie-ve?

Lyra can you forgive me?
But not everything's what it seems...

My love, I didn't want to lie to you.
I don't want to break your dreams.

(Was our friendship meant to deceive?
Is that what she'd belie-ve?)

To keep you safe, I told you lies.
If only you knew, I come from a land of spies...

No one must know, my name's not Bon Bon.
It's 'Sweetie Drops' tonight....Build here

(Was our friendship meant to deceive?
Is that what she'd belie-ve?)

Bon Bon what have you done?
How could you lie to me?

I thought you loved me...
I don't even know who you are?

Was our friendship meant to deceive?
Is that what she'd belie-ve?

Did our love mean anything?
Or was I just a Secret Agent fling?

To keep up your illusion,
Was I just a necessary exclusion?

Was our friendship meant to deceive?
Is that what she'd belie-ve?

Lyra I love you, You I didn't want to deceive.
Lyra I wanted to protect you, this you must believe.

Will I see you later tonight?
Or will the last you see of me, be through a sniper's sight?

Was our friendship meant to deceive?
Is that what she'd belie-ve?

spoken:
"Now I must find a crowd to blend into, before I put you in danger. I'll see you at the wedding."
"Fine. But we're going to talk about this later!"

4473431 Thank yew, thank yew very much. Hu-ha!

Now to see what GoF thinks....

4473049 Also

"It's Sweetie Drops not Bon Bon, please don't get me wro-ong" for that one line maybe?

4474931 You can go with that if you want... I was just trying to stay with the episode. Referencing when Bon Bon was asking Lyra if she had told anyone about her secret identity at the wedding. And HC-jumping ahead that it might not be the only time she has to go on a mission.
But your the mixer, I'm just a word-slinger. :twilightsheepish:

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