I need help with a new story of mine.
It the first real story I made on this site.

I just need someone to proofread it and maybe edit it if they want.

The basic premise is that the original Equestria is meeting a dark version of their world and it up 2 ponies to save both.

So anyone interested?

6993884 You should first use these before asking for a person:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213620/programmatical-editing
http://www.grammarcheck.me/
http://www.reverso.net/spell-checker/english-spelling-grammar
http://www.onlinecorrection.com
http://www.spellcheck.net/
http://www.slickwrite.com
http://www.paperrater.com/free_paper_grader
http://www.writersdiet.com/test.php
http://hemingwayapp.com
http://www.polishmywriting.com/
http://spellcheckplus.com/
https://app.grammarly.com/
http://www.expresso-app.org/
http://www.webpagefx.com/tools/read-able/

6994125
Sorry about the late response had school anyway
Thank you for those apps/websites they help a lot
I probably still have someone proofread it though just in case.