So, there's an adventure story that I've been working on called It Starts With a Single Step. I mostly write this story for entertainment purposes only and to fill my time with something other than reviewing and editing. Even so, I still want to know what's wrong with it; either story wise or technical wise that I have to improve upon continuing the story. If somebody wants to give me their full opinion on it, I totally welcome it (but no flaming though. You might break my lil ol' heart into two.)

Note: The story will contain explicit language and cursing. If that's not your cup of tea, I wholeheartedly advise you not to look at it.

-Editors Dreamland Random Reviewer, BBrozly.

I am your critic brotha