https://www.fimfiction.net/story/462664/alone
This is a continuation fic linked to the events of why don't they want me by rated ponystar linked it in the description of the story but honestly I need help with my pacing and just feedback of I'm keeping it to the events and theme of the story and there will be flashback chapters that explore and go deeper into the things said during why don't they want me so I would really appreciate some help here thankyou also the unpublished password is The child with no name so you can view it