Hello Everypony!!! I'm SapphireWings999 and my story that I'd like to be reviewed is The Needs Of The Many.

When a Brony named David mysteriously arrives in an Equestria that has fallen under a dark curse, he does his best to rise up and defend the innocent from a malicious, ancient evil, all the while learning things about himself that even he didn't know including his much larger role in the fate of ponykind.

I'm not really looking for anything in particular. I just want another person's opinion. I don't get very many comments on my story that fall into the "constructive criticism" realm. Mostly just people saying how great my story is which is all well and good but doesn't do much for growth as a writer.

4546634 I would be happy to review your story.

4546660 Thanks. Do you have any stories you'd like me to review?

4546688 Since it's short: Family Times, newly made.

4546770 K. I'll get around to it within the next couple of days.