Hello, I'm Legofan24. I've never tried writing a fic before, so I don't know how mine will turn out.
It is called Victor Squad: New Frontier. The URL is http://www.fimfiction.net/story/80220/victor-squad-new-frontier

Basically, it is a Star Wars crossover, with a squad of clones going to Equstria to investigate CIS involvement (though I haven't written that far yet).

I would just like help improving the fic in its entirety. Any feedback on any part of it would be appreciated. I also need plot ideas (I've only got 3 or 4 more chapters planned ahead, though that doesn't conclude the story). Thanks in advance to anyone who is willing to help!

684613 I will take a look at this later when I have the time.

Cool, thanks.