So yeah, after a dry spell, I think I'm making a bit of good headway in my story. I'll embed the story shortly. Although there's only one chapter so far, I hope that's enough till the 2nd chapter is ready. Please give it a read!

TMidlight Daze

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Drama

Fluttershy stared into the abyss that stretched on and on, and made her seem small—the deepened midlight that seemed to have no end. She wondered, "It's quite lonely, isn't it?" And so, she thought to give it company.

• Crossover
• Alt. Universe
• Fluttershy
• OC
• Main 6

Blankscape · 23k words · 294 views

For now, I want some feedback here on this fight I made; about the flow, choreography, and any point of interest under the sun. I showed it to someone a couple months ago, and it made her... lose heart to say the least. She--errr... sorta stopped writing her latest story. While I do hope she's taking it well and improving her writing, I kinda take that as a compliment??? So, I'm sharing this here to get more thoughts on it. Even just thoughts or reactions would be great!