https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/806502/prereader-for-chapter-7-of-a-derpy-princess

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Next time, try giving the spiel here, rather than a link to the spiel, it'll make you look a lot less lazy and uncaring, especially if you open up a bit and connect with the people you're asking for help from. Something like "I need some feedback. I'm really getting into the next chapter of my story, and it's the longest one I've ever done, and because of that, I keep having these doubts about what I'm doing in it, so I ask, is there anyone that would like to have a sneak peak at the newest chapter, give some feedback, and help me along with it?"

You know, something like that

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Thanks, I'll keep that in mind. I admit I was in a bit of a rush tying thus as I had a dentist appointment, but alas it isn't an excuse. I should care to make the time.

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or at least make it look like you care by taking your time, and not doing it so close to a deadline (Why not after?)