Prereader for Chapter 7 of "A Derpy Princess"

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cfawH8rYVR7Ci_HghWvHggSwOLQuq3LdX6rmVxf7Xtc/edit?usp=sharing

It's not quite ready yet, but I want thoughts for how the story is coming along. And for those who have been keeping along with the story, do you think my writing has improved from the start? I feel like this chapter is going to be really something to behold, as right now we're just about tipping 3k and I'm just about halfway done with the chapter. Hype!
Also any suggestions for a name for a bunny?

Comments

[DavisSentoV5]

I would click the link but I don't want to be spoiled