Hey everyone!

I'm looking for some more feedback for my story Far cry: The New Adventure any reviews would be appreciated. Thanks!

862195It was good, but you're going to receive a lot of flak for killing ponies, threatening Fluttershy, and having another pony (who sounds just like Luna) kill a royal guard who was fleeing in terror.

It's an interesting Idea, but I think the 1,000 word chapters are a little to short. Makes it extremely fast paced, slow down and add a little more detail. I'm also reminding you that this thread need to be taken down with in a week.

While we're self-promoting/feedback requests, I'm sorta looking for anyone who can give me ANY kind of feedback on my story Carrion: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/90269/carrion. The more detailed, the better, even if it's negative.

If any of you equinius lovicus would review mien story as well, Id really appreciate it!