2407205 *I face palm* no, what I'm trying to say is all haikus have 5 syllables for the first sentence, 7 for the second sentence and 5 for the last one. In your Haiku your second sentence had 8 syllables
This reminds me of a time I was playing splitscreen with my brother and he challenged me to a duel (As Zer0), and, he said "Yeah, I slapped you, bitch. What you gonna do about it, huh?" or something like that. Me and my brother just sat there, mouth agape for a minute, then burst into laughter.
To this day I've never got him to say it ever again, I think it's some rare occurrence.
Here are a couple quotes that I found would have been good for Zer0. I made these completely by myself, so please tell me how they are.
[When Getting A Critical Kill]
"Your death was inevitable. The single, well-placed shot, was courtesy."
"That was as beautiful as the rising sun. I am, indeed, an artist."
"Your shield did not help you."
"This gun, my brush. These bullets, my paint. Your skull, my canvas."
"Masterpiece."
[When Activiating Decepti0n]
"Your next actions are foolish."
"Over there."
"Guess which one is real. Go ahead, I'm waiting."
2407095 Not Bad but did you consider using any Haiku's?
2407111
I did, indeed, try
I honesty failed to do so,
Unfortunately
2407134 Not bad, but the middle sentence has to have 7 syllables
2407095 Zer0 speaks mostly in Haiku but not bad.
2407149
It does have several syllables.
2407171 No it needs Seven syllables not several syllables, you know as in 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
2407181
Do you understand proper English?
2407188 What's that supposed to mean?
2407195
The word 'seven' is used when counting. The word 'several' is used when describing something that has been accounted for.
2407205
*I face palm*
no, what I'm trying to say is all haikus have 5 syllables for the first sentence, 7 for the second sentence and 5 for the last one. In your Haiku your second sentence had 8 syllables
2407224
I implore you to check again. This time, using the program at the link provided. [LINK]
2407242 well look at this website: >HERE<
This reminds me of a time I was playing splitscreen with my brother and he challenged me to a duel (As Zer0), and, he said "Yeah, I slapped you, bitch. What you gonna do about it, huh?" or something like that. Me and my brother just sat there, mouth agape for a minute, then burst into laughter.
To this day I've never got him to say it ever again, I think it's some rare occurrence.