Hi, I'm looking for any one who might be interested in looking over a story of mine. It's not finished, but I'd like a second set of eyes on the first couple of chapters.
Thanks in advance

You know what? Sure... I'll bite. I'm not the greatest for creative writing, but for technical writing, with all my background in engineering and manufacturing... might find my feedback useful for a science fiction.

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Maybe we should trade? I'm looking for a prereader. I'm not looking for hardcore proofreading and editing, so much as what a reader liked and didn't like and why; and what did and didn't make sense to the reader.