I'm writing a comedy about everyone's favorite adorable filly. Basically she becomes a casino dealer and the owner uses her "weaponized cuteness" in his war against organized crime and vice in general.

I got the idea from the idea exchange, the ideas creator has agreed to be my pre-reader, but I need someone who can edit (as well as offer suggestions about characters/plot if they want)

Since this is the Sweetie Belle group I was hoping someone here would help me.

It's going to be a fun light hearted story, so there will be some adult situations etc, but nothing bad will happen to our dear sweetie belle.

It's going to be a fun light hearted story, so there will be some adult situations

I fail to see how this logically follows :)

3366107 See this is why I need an editor. Had I written It's going to be a fun light hearted story. So there will be some adult situations but.... It would be less confusing

Are you volunteering?