Not sure if this is fleshed out enough or even interesting but I need help pounding out make glaring plot holes
Here's the basic plot Rarity is tired of bad relationships with Stallions but she's not sure about dating a mare...Applejack who has had a crush on her for awhile,wants to her to herself. But Rarity is seemingly straight,So AJ purposes a deal,If Rarity goes on a few dates with her she can either continue dating her or stop with no questions asked,what will happen when Rarity takes the challenge?
I also don't know what to call it, I'm currently going with "Just Try It?"
3353844 Here is a thing: The premise might be a little overused by now, but if handled well, it could be very enjoyable. Although one question: If Rarity seems straight, why would AJ propose a date? I would at least somewhat make it so that she considers it.
3353917 "seems" Aj strikes me as Intelligent but misses the really vague signs but I was also thinking that Rarity maybe confides in AJ for her honesty of the issue?
Not sure if this is fleshed out enough or even interesting but I need help pounding out make glaring plot holes
Here's the basic plot
Rarity is tired of bad relationships with Stallions but she's not sure about dating a mare...Applejack who has had a crush on her for awhile,wants to her to herself. But Rarity is seemingly straight,So AJ purposes a deal,If Rarity goes on a few dates with her she can either continue dating her or stop with no questions asked,what will happen when Rarity takes the challenge?
I also don't know what to call it, I'm currently going with "Just Try It?"
3353844
Here is a thing: The premise might be a little overused by now, but if handled well, it could be very enjoyable. Although one question: If Rarity seems straight, why would AJ propose a date? I would at least somewhat make it so that she considers it.
~Twi
3353917 "seems" Aj strikes me as Intelligent but misses the really vague signs but I was also thinking that Rarity maybe confides in AJ for her honesty of the issue?
3353923 That might actually be a good instigator.
As far as the title is concerned? I don't know... I never think of the title before release date xD
~Twi
"Just Try It" would be good.