A long while ago, I decided to write the story The Generation That Even Time Has Forgotten. Since then it has been featured twice, and it's still incomplete. However, I still feel like I need help on it (primarily the plot and pacing, but also any other problems it might have such as sentence structure and grammar) Anypony willing to critique?
A long while ago, I decided to write the story The Generation That Even Time Has Forgotten. Since then it has been featured twice, and it's still incomplete.
However, I still feel like I need help on it (primarily the plot and pacing, but also any other problems it might have such as sentence structure and grammar)
Anypony willing to critique?