This is a story I thought was going well but didn't get a lot of views, so I dropped it

What do you think?

Shatterpoint: Equestria

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One you shouldn't worry about views. If you got people who like the story then keep going. Seeing you have no dislikes is a wonderful thing. Plus the more its updates/promoted/put in groups, the more people would look at it.

On criticisms give me a second, then.