Things were a little slow to start with cautious first steps and establishing the characters, but the action is heating up now. :) I'm curious whether people think this is a successful adaption of RP log to story; the pacing is still a bit odd as I kept nearly all the original text, but I think it's readable.
Just a little montage of things we've gotten up to so far in 'Expedition to the Cloudbreak Islands':
Things were a little slow to start with cautious first steps and establishing the characters, but the action is heating up now. :) I'm curious whether people think this is a successful adaption of RP log to story; the pacing is still a bit odd as I kept nearly all the original text, but I think it's readable.