What has become of the magical land of Equestria, all is black, and all is lost it seems. A stallion wakes up sealed in a padded cell wearing nothing but a straitjacket that seems permanently stuck on him, confused at who he is and where he is...
6704513 thank you so much for the feedback, i noticed i made some errors heh, had a friend proof read it this weekend at his house...now i need a proof reader and editor on here. It is a work in progress, and even then, I personally felt that the first chapter is kinda rough and hard to get into, but the second chapter is gonna be all the more terrifying and more pull in. Stay tune~ i'm almost done with it.
Not bad at all. A few noticeable errors here and there, but the story is very interesting... and a bit terrifying.
6704513 thank you so much for the feedback, i noticed i made some errors heh, had a friend proof read it this weekend at his house...now i need a proof reader and editor on here. It is a work in progress, and even then, I personally felt that the first chapter is kinda rough and hard to get into, but the second chapter is gonna be all the more terrifying and more pull in. Stay tune~ i'm almost done with it.