Dance inspiration. Revelation from the author. Part 1. · 7:05pm Jul 16th, 2022
I welcome all readers!
Well, I want to share some revelations that should give an understanding of the plot for this story.
Initially, this whole story was planned as a short story (about 10 thousand words) with porn content, with the participation of a human character and one pony (mare). The idea came up quite spontaneously when I was fascinatingly looking through some images.
Then I proposed to my friend KittyGuardian participate in this project. He had to choose a mare that we would use in the plot in a romantic way with the natural consequences of the bed scenes.
The bets were made, and there was no turning back. He chose "Vinyl Scratch". I have to admit it was a good character choice. And then back in June, I started writing what is now Chapter 2 and Chapter 3. Yes, over time, we began to realize that one character in the story would still be too few, and sometimes even not quite logical. It so happened that my plot plan began to imply that such a story would be longer not only in duration, but also in a bunch of other details.
In my fantasies, I had to write this world going beyond the specific details that focus only on the characters. And it was quite logical. When the first 15 thousand words of the text were ready, it already became clear that this would be not just a porn story, but something more. There can be a lot of intrigue and even adventure in this, and all this against the background of adult humor, with a touch of playfulness and lust... and of course detailed porn scenes. It won't be a short story anyway, and as I warned in Chapter 1 that I will be gradually adding new characters to the "Long Story Description".
However, time passed, and for some reasons that caused a lot of delays in writing such a story, I had to completely take this project into my own hands. Otherwise, my inspiration would just be wasted. And now it's quite noticeable by the frequency with which I release new chapters.
According to my plot plan, I am writing a part of the story in which a lot of attention is paid to the main character "Arhip" and his backstory. All this is written exactly as you could already see in the plot. He tells his revelation in front of the princesses, and sometimes takes breaks, as a result of which, I also write his story in real time (which was shown in Chapter 5). At the same time, I still keep quite a few intriguing moments, and smoothly give an explanation to many things that are happening. I also do not ignore the world building of such a story, which was already noticeable.
Yes, in my story, many characters still have exactly the behavior and mannerisms that I decided to write for them. The lustfulness of some characters is quite logical, since this is still one of the alternative worlds where such behavior is quite the norm. This is exactly what should be the hallmark of this world.
When I wrote a specific part of the plot, where there was a hint of sexual desires in the mare or the main character, I always asked two questions.
"What if?" or "Why not?"
If some princess wants to show playfulness and increased interest in the main character, then why should I interfere with her in this? She is quite free in her choice, and I can understand her.
Well, when I finish writing this part of the story, which introduces readers to the main character and other characters important to the plot, I will proceed to the next part. All this will be written in one story, but the second part will already be more interesting, since some characters and many details have already been revealed. And then Arhip will have to lead his independent life, but only without the custody of the princesses. He must show his talents and go through a lot of tests that will meet on his not easy path. He will be able to learn a lot of truth... including the mare he was able to fall in love with.
However, Vinyl Scratch, Octavia and Derpy are important characters in the plot for a reason... but this is already something that will be revealed as the next chapters are written.
Some readers have a question about the name of the main character. Because it is a very unusual and rare name. But this name is quite real, and what I wrote has in chapter 1 is true. And this is perhaps the funny part of my revelation.
Firstly, I am definitely not a supporter of the name "Anon". I don't like this name, and even more so it would be stupid to use it for a long story. But I was still inclined to maintain a certain humor in the plot, and I was constantly going over in my memory all the names that could be suitable for the main character with a difficult fate.
Then I remembered the famous story "Xenophilia". And you already know what the man's name is in this story. "Bellerophon" or "Lero", which in ancient Greek mythology means "Tamer of Pegasus, punished by the Gods." Although I have to admit that riding a pegasus is a very erotic activity if you read the story of "Xenophilia".😜
Funny, isn't it? So I thought so too, and decided that I would throw my own trump card with the choice of a name for a man.
Arhip in translation from Greek means "Chief of cavalry" or "Master of horses" or "Senior over the horses".
It was this name that created the whole fate and background of the main character, which is already becoming a funny part starting from chapter 1.
I thought that if there is someone who saddled pegasus, then I will have someone who will be the "master of horses". Well, let's see who's cooler? And who will get more ponies in their love herd? (harem).
Now I am ready to please those who are waiting for the next update. Chapter 6 is almost ready, but it will still be a big chapter, because it just doesn't make sense to divide it into two parts. This chapter contains two points of view and a continuation of Arhip's memoirs. (And of course, I'll have to mark this chapter NSFW). I will publish this chapter in the coming hours.
Thank you all for paying attention to this blog and continuing to read this story. A story that has its surprises, but also a lot of sweet moments.
I have not even finished chapter 5 yet, but I completely agree with some of the images towards the end. Arhip HAS to ride a pegasis in the air. Even a princess. Since all the ladies are ... naked. He definitely needs to do it naked too. Why have this breach of contact between them, if there are any clothes involved during said riding?
I definitely would pitch in riding Rainbow dash naked. That girl needs taming. Sadly she isn't in this story ... yet. The only pure pegasis we have in this story is Derpy. She at least definitely needs naked riding!!! :)
Naked princess riding is a must as well. Only question for that is ... how many. I know there is a purple bookwormish one that definitely could use naked riding in the air. I can just imagine her feeling .... his naked 'sword' during the ride!!! Would be so much fun!!! At least it would be for me to read. :P
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"Master of Horses" has yet to conquer the hearts of these very horses. Ride one pegasus... this has already been done in another story. Therefore, Arhip will have to ride not only pegasus, but also something cooler.
I was amused by your comment! As soon as I found a suitable image, you used the word "Naked" several times for this comment.
Heh😆... What's gotten into you? So many erotic fantasies... I swear, you will lose your ideas and fantasies for nothing if you don't write a story yourself to realize such potential. But I've already told you this many times.
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I know riding on a pegasis has been done before... But was the rider naked? :P
I'm sure all the ponies were!!!
PS: If I was gonna lose my ideas ... would have happened many many years ago.
Yet they are still here and new ones keep coming! :P