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Max Ksenofil


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2022

Updating the next chapter, and also some revelations from the author. · 3:39pm Sep 18th, 2022

Greetings to all readers of this blog!

Chapter 8 is finally ready, and will be published soon. But since I haven't released a new chapter for almost two months, I'll surprise the readers. For someone it will be pleasant, and for someone it will be a burden.

This chapter has an expanded version, or conditionally two chapters in one. The volume of words in this chapter (more than 30K). However, this is a very informative chapter on an entertaining plot!

Now a few revelations.

Yes, I promised in this chapter to show three different points of view. Twilight, Arhip, Luna. But in the process of writing, I began to realize that I would have to "slightly" adjust the plot plan. As a result, I had to abandon the "Luna POV" and the Twilight dance with Arhip (however, all this will be moved to the next chapter, since the content of Chapter 8 is already quite large). Nevertheless, this chapter still contains a lot of interesting and sometimes funny moments.

Thus, I decided to achieve greater efficiency from the described scene. And besides, it would be quite logical.

Instead of "Luna POV", it was written "Cadence POV".

Why is this the case? Because, the playfulness of the Princess of Love at a party in the style of "princess of love", which according to the plot is arranged by four princesses as a farewell party for Arhip, I like more. And there are plot, logical reasons for this.

So, this particular chapter shows a lot of intimate, playful moments. And of course, I have to mark this chapter as "NSFW", because there really are reasons for this. After all, I'm writing a story for adults and I don't want to avoid detailed descriptions of anything in the plot. Even if it's something passionate.

Thank you all for your attention, and for not refusing to read the story in which I show my point of view about how such a world can look like, and how all these characters can behave like adults.

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