Dominant Rainbow Mini-Update · 2:09am Jun 1st, 2022
So, in addition to the new chapter, I inserted about 3 paragraphs or roughly 300 words into the first chapter of Dominant Rainbow.
Not a HUGE addition, I just felt like the first chapter didn't have enough playfulness. Like, Rainbow just puts Logan on the floor, walks over him, then comes back and races him. That seemed a bit too abrupt to me. So I inserted another short game that she plays with him which I think fixes the pacing issue. I also fixed a few sentences that were worded funny and other little things that only a dedicated scholar could hope to notice.
Is it worth rereading the first chapter to see it? Eh, I don't know. The addition isn't a major game changer. I'd hope my work is good enough to be enjoyed multiple times though. Up to you. You can tell me if it was worth it.
The new bit comes right after Rainbow leaves Logan on the floor. Enjoy the addition and the next chapter!
