Graduation · 3:28am May 28th, 2022
Hey guys, I wanted to let you know that for the next three months I'll have a lot of time on my hooves. Yesterday, I graduated from Eighth Grade. I'll be a freshman next year! But that's beside the point--the point is that I'm going to start trying to write again. I'll be working on the prologue for the newly revised "The Revival of the Tambelonian Empire", and I would love to hear some ideas from you guys on how to start it out.
Anyway, I'm excited that it's officially Summer Vacation and that I can get back to working on the stories that I love to write. In my mind, a story isn't just a few words on a paper or a screen; it's an experience for the mind to visualize and enjoy.
Sincerely yours, Robert S.
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Cool. Right now I’m somewhat popular in my school even though I’ve done nothing to warrant that
Prologue: Grogar escapes, extremely weakened. He waits two seasons to show up (like Tirek), and the first thing he does is bring back Sombra and the PoS. Then the three of them set out to find everyone else
Chapter one opens with a brand new villain defeated in ten seconds, but the villain says that they’ll never beat his master. Earlier on you’re supposed to assume he’s talking about Grogar but it’s actually Orthodox. Go anywhere from there
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I love the idea for chapter one. However, I was planning to have Sombra and the Pony of Shadows come in later. Although Grogar will still be incredibly weakened--even weaker than he was in the old version.