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  • 111 weeks
    I have made a slight alteration to the story.

    I realized that an aspect of this story puts me into a bit of a corner, and that’s the fact that everyone in Equestria knows what Cozy Glow looks like. It would make a lot more sense if her name is in the newspaper but not her actual picture. The reason I say this is because: if you go back to Season 9, every random pony that Cozy interacts with doesn't know who she is. They

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  • 121 weeks
    Re-Writing Chapter 2

    I have decided that I need to remove chapter 2 and start over. It was never meant to be a part of the story, it was just something fun I thought of and improvised my way through. I now realize that by adding Rainbow Dash, I've written myself into a corner because I have no idea what to do with her. I should have stuck with my original plan instead of adding something new on a whim. The original

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  • 394 weeks
    Re-write coming soon

    I'm going to be doing a bit of a re write on Ambition of a Traitor. I started the story with only a slight idea of where I was going. Stupid decision I know, but after having writers block for over a year, I was super excited when a good idea finally popped into my head, and I immediately published it after it had been looked over by a pre reader and proofreader. But now that I'm writing an

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Mar
13th
2022

I have made a slight alteration to the story. · 3:03am Mar 13th, 2022

I realized that an aspect of this story puts me into a bit of a corner, and that’s the fact that everyone in Equestria knows what Cozy Glow looks like. It would make a lot more sense if her name is in the newspaper but not her actual picture. The reason I say this is because: if you go back to Season 9, every random pony that Cozy interacts with doesn't know who she is. They probably heard of her but they don't actually recognize her. This frees up a lot of possibilities for me, which is why I decided to make this change.

This is not a massive alteration, everything I have planned will still happen, but if I want to add anything new, this frees me up more. Now, this doesn't mean that Cozy can just walk around freely. The guards still have her description and are placed all over Equestria looking for her. Jay would still be in a hurry to leave the country because the guards would have his description as well, and he doesn't want to live the rest of his life looking behind his back. This is a very small change to the overall story.

And that’s it! Everything else remains the same. Chapter 3 should be out soon!  

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