Peachy

I want to explain; all the original characters mentioned in my story "Peachy" are all ocs that can be found on my DeviantArt page. I do want to make up art posts for it, so every so far down you read, there is a picture accompanying the story. Or, put some artwork in the author's notes. I don't exactly expect this story to take off anymore than it has, because I'm kind of just writing this for fun, as a "What if I woke up as an oc-" story. That's why it's kind of chaotic.

Also, I didn't know what town to put this story in so I just got out the map to Equestria and imagined the islands in Luna Bay to be kind of spread out like Japan is-like in the distant future. Maybe they broke apart and ponies live there. I don't know, that was my idea. I don't think those islands were ever used...but I'm not an avid reader of the comics and didn't watch the rest of the show past season 6... I didn't want to insert any canon characters in the story because I didn't want the canon characters to become the focus. It's kind of in the Season 9 timeline where Twilight takes Celestia's place and she has Luster Dawn as a student. Maybe even further in the future. I have no idea.

I am going to be editing the story over the next couple updates so that it can be smoothed out. I did get a proofreader, my sister as a second eye, but she didn't catch all the mistakes and she's more of a fast reader/skimmer. I read over it finally with a fresh perspective and caught more mistakes than she did.

So that's where I am at right now. I am currently working on chapter 5, and will get that out as soon as I read over it, and make sure everything is to my liking.