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trinidream


27 year old pegasister, still trying my hand at pony stories.

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It was a long day of sketching a pony I recently made. I must have filled two pages in my sketchbook of him. I went to bed but the next morning, what did I wake up to?

Apparently, waking up as the very pony I was sketching the night before. But why are all my other characters here? And how does everything feel so real?


Proofread by Lexime

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 8 )

I like it and hope you continue it.

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Thank you~ I most definitely will! <3

Cute So far Keep it up

Finished reading what you have out so far, I really like it. I do like the mystery in the story as there could be more to all of this then just a soul transfer

Fun chapter, interesting that Peachy and the guy's memories are starting to bleed through now, Mix-up their identity. I wonder why Peachy seemed so unconcerned about taking control again despite being pissed at him. I wonder why Luna didn't seemed to take the guy's clamed more seriously is if because she didn't believe him or it's just the effect of having your mind swimming in the dream scape? I do like the idea that there is more to the guy's arrival to this world.

Ooooh, this is going to be an interesting experience.

“The spell had a timer.” He explained, standing up and walking over to the cake. “It was like...uhh until the sun rises on the third day or something like that. The world will be shrouded in darkness until come that day. And then there will be a price to pay.” He hissed, narrowing his eyes and then burst out laughing. “Whatever that means.” I watched as he picked up some frosting on his hoof, and licked it off. “Mm! Buttercream...you want some?”

My brother in Christ you can't just "whatever that means" something like that?!

Figure it out yourself.”

Oh, that's sooo not good.
I'm getting the feeling that that "price to pay" is the original Peachy's soul, but it's not like we would be able to know, now that the story's dead.

This was good while it lasted, though.

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