Rewrite Permission · 10:04pm Dec 15th, 2021
I also thought about making Thomas’s original mother look like Dean Cadance but as an animated version of Michelle Williams’s character from the Venom movies, and maybe add Liane Cartman and Sheila Broflovski from South Park, but as Thomas’s old aunts.
And maybe have Thomas’s abusive father look like Randy Marsh from South Park, but in this uniform:
This is what his mother could look like. And maybe have some references to her actress's character from Venom 1 and 2.
And I might use the opening scene from Hulk (2003) because of Bruce Banner’s younger childhood as a baby and a toddler.
I also might do something about his mother’s death and maybe Liane and Sheila’s death. Until his father would then abuse him and beat him, before he would be arrested and Thomas sent to the orphanage. And that would be when the rest of the story would happen.
But I might have his father be drunk with beer and wine, like how Randy Marsh did but maybe have the anger be like David Banner from the flashback of the Hulk movie I mentioned, but maybe have it also refer to James Mason from A New Home by APoeticHeart and the pony Cold Wind from GunsNRoses365, who is Lightning Twister’s abusive father.
If everyone’s okay with it, let me know.
AND PLEASE LEAVE SOME COMMENTS SO THAT I CAN SEE IF YOU HAVE ANY IDEAS OR COMPLIMENTS.
If you do this, I'll have to delete your reviews on the storyline. Do you accept this?
I do. But it’s actually for the first one
Or you can edit it but with the rewrite I’m doing
Meaning keep it
You Have Thy Permission To Rewrite thine Tale My Lord.
yeah go for it
I like the Idea, you go for it buddy.
Great story idea go for it
I like the idea go for it