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ComatoseVEVO


Just some guy trying to make it in life and write pony words as a passtime, I am currently 25 years old

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  • 8 weeks
    New Project Announcement

    Hey all, how have you been, FIMFic's most consistently late author here.

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  • 53 weeks
    Chapter 2 sneak peek

    Moving through the destroyed city center was rather tricky, the mix of collapsed buildings and totaled cars made for plentiful obstacles and even more ambush positions, which is why I chose to move building to building, between alleyways and backdoors, this made for slower progress but the extra cover was nice and it gave more scavenging opportunities.

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  • 78 weeks
    Update

    SOOOOOO, I currently have a lot of free time, I'll try to get the second chapter done by the end of the week
    Let's hope the creative juices get flowing

    that's all

    -ComatoseVEVO

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  • 79 weeks
    Universe, Dark and why?

    Universe

    So vast and unexplored
    Bright and beautiful
    A limitless expanse
    So full and empty
    Forever expanding
    Never stopping
    That's my love to you

    Dark

    Deep limitless dark
    Clouds my sight
    Slayed only by a rich violet
    Piercing through the dark
    Surely as an arrow in flight
    I wonder, though, where are you headed?
    Is it me you visit so unknowingly?

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  • 79 weeks
    Another Morning

    Yet another morning I wake alone
    Missing your essence beside me
    Knowing it has to be this way, alone
    Even then I dream of you, alone
    Like a leech this has stuck to my heart
    Draining all the life away
    My memory still plagued by those moments
    Digging into my skin without reprieve

    -ComatoseVEVO

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Oct
28th
2021

Sneak peek of the new and improved chapter 1 TCB SA · 7:08am Oct 28th, 2021

While The Hours Tick By…

Smoke Billowed out of burning buildings in the background, Lima, Peru was still somewhat recognizable as the former capital of the extinct Republic of Peru, however the copious fires and destroyed houses created a visage not unlike desolation.

This is getting ridiculous- I thought angrily- not only are our supplies running low, but we have also scavenged everything in the city, if we can’t find anything soon, we will have to move someplace else.

“Yo, Leo, you okay? – a 27 year old guy with auburn hair with short and unkempt look, Felipe asked while he mindlessly chewed on a piece of pony roast- you seemed rather… gone for a second there.”

“Not really bro”- my mind endlessly raced with thoughts, old and new worries bubbling to the surface- it’s just, I don’t really know what to do anymore, our supplies run shorter every day and there’s fewer in the big supermarkets of the area, not to mention two close calls with the pony army almost getting found out, I’m starting to think we should pack up and run elsewhere.”

“Don’t you worry, if we stick together and focused, we will all make it, we always do” Felipe countered rapidly, a reassuring smile adorned his face. “we just have hold tight until they move their FOB away, then all we have to do is move up until reaching the States and join the local resistance, the radio’s been fuzzy lately but in some frequencies I’ve heard whispers of a big one hiding in the outskirts of Atlanta, and that thy plan on attacking the Bureau.”

“Even with the possibility of joining the resistance we have to be careful, especially with Cathy, she’s still too young to fight, however she has to take interest in training in order for her to help in the future, however since she lost her mother not so long ago, she has been left in a state of shock”- I replied with a tired sigh- “I can only hope to whatever is out there that we can survive, we need more people too, a group of ten is decent but it lacks any major fighting potential, and the Equestrian army is over 10000 strong about 8000 of those are Newfoals.”

“I’d never taken you to be the religious type” -Felipe grinned mischievously at me- of maybe you’ve been hiding it from us?”

“Now is not the time for jokes, you jackass” A tall and athletic girl in her mid-twenties, her light brown hair caught in a slight breeze, Paula interjected while punching him in the back of the head lightly. “Now eat the meat before it gets cold, that’s bad for your stomach”


what do you guys think, it's been years since I wrote anything any feedback is apreciated.

Comments ( 1 )

No olvides la resistencia de los Andes y la de la Amazonia, esos ponis no sabrán que los golpeó

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