Idea for a Fallout Equestria fic Part 2 · 4:35am May 2nd, 2021
So around two years ago, I posted an idea for a Fallout Equestria story featuring Comet. It was based on the Death of Superman storyline and ended with Comet dying in battle against the pony version of Doomsday. It was supposed to be followed up by part 2, but the negative reception caused me to drop it. So after two years, I'm back to pitch part 2 of my Fallout Equestria fanfic.
It begins with an adolescent Comet awakening inside a metal tube. He is dressed in a custom Stable-Tec jumpsuit modeled on his costume, minus the cape. He finds himself inside a laboratory that has long since been abandoned. Being underground for so long, his powers are inactive. He eventually finds a working terminal and a diary from a Professor Welshcob. Unfortunately, the later entries are corrupted, leaving him with only one clue as to how he ended up here. A name, Project Haizum. Acquiring a Pipbuck, he heads for the surface, encountering radroaches along the way. Eventually reaching the exit, he feels the sunlight fall upon him, empowering him.
As you can probably guess by now, this story's beginning is based on Connor Kent's origin story and the Reign of the Supermen storyline. 'Comet' is actually one of many clones created by the wartime project Haizum to provide a pro-war alternative to the pacifistic original who was banished to the Phantom Zone. Other characters will include a Synth Comet inhabited by the conscience of one of the scientists involved with Project Haizum. A Paladin of the Steel Rangers who is inspired by the Stallion of Steel, and a Koltonian Artifact given Equine form. There will be a character in the pre-war age. A volunteer who undergoes a treatment involving gene-splicing to essentially become an Equestrian version of the Homelander. He and Comet battle after the 'Hooflander' (Not his final name BTW) inevitably becomes megalomaniacal and begins going on a rampage. It ends with Comet putting him into a permanent vegetative state with his heat vision.
Anyway, these are just some ideas, let me know what you think. I gotta go to bed.
To be perfectly honest, I find a Fallout Equestria plot overdone and would much prefer to see the continuation of your Comet series. But if you feel strongly about this story then who am I to discourage you? GO NUTS.