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MelodyStories


My name is Melody and I’m 15 years old.

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Apr
17th
2021

Everything wrong with No magic flies · 3:50pm April 17th

Wind. That’s the only thing the lone Wonderbolt could feel.

You can feel more than wind! You can feel coolth, warmth, etc!

Sins: 1

She continued flying until she found a nice cloud to rest on. She landed on the soft, bouncy cloud

clouds aren’t bouncy!

Sins: 2

“Oh crap…” she said looking at her contrail. She knew that down below, her rainbow was spotted. She needed to hurry up, and recharge stamina. “Come on Dash, you can do it.”

You didn’t tell me it was rainbow dash!

Sin: 3




Sins: 50

Sentence:



Magic Dash AAAAAAAA

Report MelodyStories · 268 views ·
Comments ( 54 )

I don’t get it

...Are you even trying?

First of all: the fact that Rainbow could only feel wind is meant to represent how she's alone

Second of all: if clouds aren't bouncy, then how do the pegasi bounce on them to make rain? Exhibit A:

At the 0:33 mark

Third of all: He held off on telling the reader who it was to build suspense.

Fourth: how did you go from 3 sins to 50?

Not only can you not find proper “sins” in a story, but you can’t even count? For shame.

Oooh, do one of my stories.

ITS THE SOWSE YOU GUYS ITS GOING TO MAGIC_STORIES BRAIN!!! THE SOWSE

IT'S THE SOWSE!!

This was literally so short it could be classified as an anti-peen.

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No, dude, it's the ap sowse. I'm telling you.

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The reason why you’re taking this seriously is actually beyond me.

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Ap sowse is a thing!!

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Boil it

Refrigerate it

Stimulate your senses.

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Gimme hug. Then I'll think about it.

LAAAHHKE A AAAAAP SOWSE

ap sowse

IT'S THE AP SOWSE MY GUY!!

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Yum yum in my tum tum

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Mom, mom

Hush

Eat some ap sowse

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I'M LIKE MELODY; USING ALL CAPS! AP SOWSEEEEEEE

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Yas!!! Eat, mother!!! Jk

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Eat the fucking sowse.

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I don't like applesauce though...

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*Forces legendary ap sowse down throat* Eat. The. Ap sowse.

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*le gasp*

Now I’m upset with you.

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Stop it!
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But...I...didn't...

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*Forces more down to shut your mouth up*

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*Vomits* blech! SUNNY!

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YOU MONSTER!!! EAT THE AP SOWSE!!!

The blog didn’t save the rest of it :twilightoops:

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*Whimpering* I don't want to!

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Big yikes. Was it too unwilling to tolerate the immense bullshit it was being fed?

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Okay okay... *Hugs close* I'm sorry... *Nuzzle*

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*Downs it in one gulp*

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Have some thick water. *Spits into your mouth*

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You let Blu drink your bodily fluids, why can't you drink mine? As in my saliva

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*Shoves away and storms off*

Why is this so short?? Plus most of these sins make no sense-
also come on anyone could of know that was Rainbow Dash.

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It didn’t save the rest of the sins

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Do one of my stories, pwease

Wow, you just humiliate yourself dear author. Those sentences have nothing wrong about it.

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